Research for Summer

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0Bz09vIt4SMoncV81R2tETGNmeUE/edit?usp=sharing

Evaluation of my presentation

• How your research contributed (or failed to contribute) to the presentation
• The delivery of the presentation
• The topic area chosen
• How you plan to develop the presentation into an extended academic essay

I think my research contributed to my presentation fairly as i researched my topic very well as i had good points to share with my colleges but also gained enough information to relate back to my question and answer with good detail, however i failed to really put in a lot of media terminology and theory therefore this is what i would need to focus and improve on to make sure my grade increases and gain a very good understanding of media terminology and theory.

I think the delivery of the presentation was good as i was very confident and got my points across clearly which is very effective as this shows i have very good presentational skills and also the topic area chosen was focussed on as well and i had gained a lot of information to relate back to the topic area and get my point across to the audience and make them understand the question i'm trying to answer. 

I will plan to develop the presentation into an extended academic essay by relating the question with high detailed media terminology and theory to make sure i can gain an understanding of the terms but also apply it to my answer and research to make me gain the highest grade possible.

Feedback

WWW: Researched to full detail, Good pace and accurate, Confident, a bit of Media Terminology, good key concepts, range of sources.
EBI: Link more theories to my answer, more uses and gratifications, much more media terminology, compare to other aspects.